quixoticwith the little pieces of carbon
i fall to the ground
the firework's lost that sparkle
with that awesome sound
my spark was incendiary
my brightness now a hue
for just i was a superstar
but now the end i'm due
i know i've lived my moment
i know it wasn't a lie
so content i'd be, sitting
watching the others fly.
::composed 5 Jan:with help from littleprince's keywords:depressed over mediocrity::
For others to embrace
A crowning moment of glory
Merely a transient phase
A beacon for the misguided
In spirit and endeavour
A mission completed
Gratifies its soul forever
a lot more fluid and literary.
anyway, my short piece was in response to your piece... with the impression that your composition came from the heart.
let me deliberate on it...
Wat bit ego u've got! ;)
(soldier)
It's meant to offer a different perspective to littleprince's.
Hmm.. not logging into your lj?
;)
hey u got my icq messages? i need cylum sticks... can u help?
(soldier)
.....
With goals, depression is inevitable....
For we all know, life is but a facade of experiences....
Anyway, great meeting you at the NYE party .. finally got round to checking out your lj. Rather sublime stuff, I must say. Perhaps things will be clearer if I read it again in the morning. =) I like the background..
Good luck with your XDA II, and speaking of double entendres:
http://www.morejokes.co.uk/jokes/825/
Catch you around again some time.