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14 years of Livejournalling, and hopefully, more to come.

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First poem of the year.

with the little pieces of carbon
i fall to the ground
the firework's lost that sparkle
with that awesome sound

my spark was incendiary
my brightness now a hue
for just i was a superstar
but now the end i'm due

i know i've lived my moment
i know it wasn't a lie
so content i'd be, sitting
watching the others fly.

::composed 5 Jan:with help from littleprince's keywords:depressed over mediocrity::

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A desire for eternity
For others to embrace
A crowning moment of glory
Merely a transient phase

A beacon for the misguided
In spirit and endeavour
A mission completed
Gratifies its soul forever

Hey nice one,
a lot more fluid and literary.

did your original poem stem from the heart or was it just an inspiration?

anyway, my short piece was in response to your piece... with the impression that your composition came from the heart.

hmmm tough question...
let me deliberate on it...

excerpts of the verse hinted something i was familiar with, so...

Ego! Ego! Ego!
Wat bit ego u've got! ;)


Erm, it's not associated with myself, doh.
It's meant to offer a different perspective to littleprince's.

Hmm.. not logging into your lj?



hey u got my icq messages? i need cylum sticks... can u help?


Mediocrity is what makes any achievements distinctive....
With goals, depression is inevitable....
For we all know, life is but a facade of experiences....

OK, you, littleprince & zhengjie can duke it out to be the 2004 LJ poet laureate. badnomad has some pretty wacky ones too.

Anyway, great meeting you at the NYE party .. finally got round to checking out your lj. Rather sublime stuff, I must say. Perhaps things will be clearer if I read it again in the morning. =) I like the background..

Good luck with your XDA II, and speaking of double entendres:

Catch you around again some time.

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